So we finished up a second draft (which you can see by following the youtube link below!) and sent it over to Brett.
He promptly sent over some feedback which was a lot more scaled down than the first one, meaning we were on the right tracks! Not as many changes were required this time and he just had a few things he wanted to add!
Click the photos to get a better look!
He also included a couple of examples from different tv shows in his email which gave us good guidance as to what sort of sounds he was after in certain parts of the animation.
Second Draft (video and audio)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gXo7OM3O-JU&feature=youtu.be